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David Smith's avatar

This seems a tad overwrought, for what it is.

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GD McClintock's avatar

Thank you for reading my review and for your comment. If by "overwrought" you mean what the dictionary defines as "too elaborate or complicated in design or construction," then I agree with your assessment.

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David Smith's avatar

I mean the other definition.

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GD McClintock's avatar

If my writing reveals " a state of nervous excitement or anxiety" then I am delighted! Thank you for your perceptive comment!

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